お題：Does a society promote inclusivity sufficiently?
社会は十分に包括性を促進しているか？
No意見です。
まだ促進されていないという立場で書きました。
イントロ
The debate over whether inclusivity is respected in society has persisted over the past years. While inclusivity offers distinct benefits for the general public, more efforts should be made to promote it. There are three reasons to support this view.
理由1 = 学校がインクルーシブ化されていない
Firstly, schools do not embrace inclusivity sufficiently. For instance, in Japan, public schools have few students with disabilities as most of them attend special schools. Education that includes diverse backgrounds and characteristics can foster tolerance and a supportive attitude at school.
理由2 = 会社では新卒雇用が多い
Secondly, many companies in Japan prefer hiring new graduates. Although young workers can be hired at lower pay, individuals with experience from various fields can help companies become more diverse and competitive in the market by utilizing their different skills and perspectives.
理由3 = 女性のリーダーが少ない
Finally, having more female leaders is necessary for higher positions in companies and organizations. The low percentage of females in the cabinet is a case in point. Compared to other countries, Japan has fewer female leaders in most establishments. It is imperative to elicit opinions and views from all genders to create an inclusive society.
グラマーチェックにはChatGPTを使いました。
