お題：Has religion diminished its importance?
宗教の重要性は薄れたのか？
イントロと結論は省略します。
Yes 意見で書いてみます。
「宗教の価値は減っていくだろう」という意見です。
理由1 = 宗教は平和に繋がっていない
Firstly, religion can disencourage world peace in general. For instance, many major conflicts today are rooted in religion. As people are aware of the potential negative effects of religion, a growing number of have have less interest in religious activities in modern society.
理由2 = 宗教は多様な価値観を受け入れていない
Secondly, religion cannot embrace different values. There is a fierce debate regarding the same-sex marriage. Some conservative people with a strict religion do not accept it. While all people shold have the same human rights, the topic would remain controversial as long as the opposition persiss against it.
Finally, technological advancements can meet people's demand. In the past, there is a certain demand of religion when people feel unsecured, lost, or unhappy. The technology we have now can provide tremendous resources to make people happier, such as medical advancements and entertainment.
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