お題：Should minors who commit serious crimes be tried as adults?
重大犯罪を犯した未成年者は成人として裁かれるべきか？
イントロ
Whether or not minors who commit serious crimes should be tried as adults has been one of the controversial topics. Despite opposition, I do not think that they should be tried as adults for the following three reasons.
理由1
Firstly, minors are generally incapable of making the right decisions. Research shows that juveniles are extremely impulsive, leading to a risk of being involved in serious crimes. The adolescent brain is still developing, making it highly susceptible to reward- and peer-influence.
理由2
Secondly, environmental factors should be taken into account. Scientific research indicates that children are more vulnerable to negative influences from their environment or peers, and children’s moral character is not fully developed. It can be said that a lack of education and family support is linked to serious crimes committed by youngsters.
理由3
Finally, the rehabilitation of juvenile delinquents can be beneficial to society. Prisons should focus more on rehabilitation rather than punishment. Since minors have a long time to live their lives, the effects of rehabilitation can be productive and beneficial in the rest of their lives. It is imperative for society to understand why they commit such crimes, and the root causes should be addressed accordingly. More recognition of the effectiveness of rehabilitation can give rise to societies that are more tolerant and understanding.
結論
In conclusion, based on the aforementioned reasons, I do not think that minors who commit a serious crime should be tried as aduls.
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