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1q_(賛成)エシカルで財務的に成功できるか?

お題:Does the adoption of ethical practices contribute to financial success?
倫理的慣行の採用は財務的成功に寄与するか?

 

賛成意見。

結論は省略します。

 

理由3つは難しいトピック。

「(会社の)成功=利益が上がる」なので、そこに持っていかないといけない。

 

(書いてみて気づいたが、会社に限るトピではなかった。「個人的な成功」ということで書いたらどうなっただろう)

 

 

イントロ

Ethical practices that companies can implement vary widely. The ethical aspect of a sustainable economy lies in its commitment to minimizing negative impacts on the environment and society while fostering long-term economic viability.

 

理由1 = 会社の評価を高める(利益につながる)

Firstly, ethical practices can enhance the reputation of companies. For example, adopting sustainable methods in the production of clothing items can capture customers' interest. With a growing understanding of the importance of a sustainable economy, many customers are likely to prefer products made in an environmentally friendly way. By using reusable materials to manufacture items, Patagonia, an outdoor gear company, has significantly contributed to raising awareness of environmental protection, leading to increased profits.

 

理由2 = 価格が安くなる(利益につながる)

Secondly, refill and reusable products can appeal to consumers. Sales of reusable items contribute to a reduction in waste. Generally, a complete detergent package is more expensive than its refill. Thus, selling more refills can save both money and effort for companies compared to selling detergent in packages.

 

理由3 = 優秀な労働者を維持できる(利益につながる)

Finally, financial contributions to society can help retain skilled employees. For instance, when a company donates a substantial amount of money to a disaster-hit region, it instills a sense of security among its workers. The assurance of the company's financial stability encourages skilled workers to stay, resulting in greater commercial gains. 

 

 

グラマーチェックにはChatGPTを使いました。

 

 

理由3に会社の評価(イメージ)を高めることができると書きそうになったが、理由1と重なってしまうので避けた。理由1、2、3は、はっきりと違う内容で書かないといけないのに、それができないケースが多いのかもしれない。=>内容点が上がらない要因?